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shadow
Apr 20, 2008 17:00:45 GMT -5
Post by deathmaster on Apr 20, 2008 17:00:45 GMT -5
Name: shadow
Age: 13
Gender: male
Rank: academy
Appearance: where's a black mask where only his eye's where seen, where's black sock's no shoe's,where's long black pance, where's black glove's and a black shirt, has two swords on his back, has a black carrying bag in his waste. red eye's blond hair with a scare on going stright down the middle of his left eye
Personality: vary kind when he's not just waking up or on a mission
Village of Origin: village hidden in the leave's
Jutsus: hide in shadows. clones. day of the shadows. History: his parents died when he was 5 years old then his brother killed him self when i was 7.
RP Sample: shadow looked down on naruto in till he herd that naruto had the nine tailed fox then shadow was scared of naruto but at the name time was still friends with him
Did You Read The Rules?: yes
blood line secrets: summoning a black wolf with out using any Chakara i'm the last of the black wolf clan
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shadow
Apr 22, 2008 2:22:41 GMT -5
Post by Katsumi on Apr 22, 2008 2:22:41 GMT -5
No go, sorry. It must ALL be your own work here, original ideas only. Other than that, you've got a lot to work on before I can approve it, too. Please read[/b] both the rules and the character template and go by what they say - copy&paste the clean version of the template and fill it in. You also need to choose a ninja village that actually exists, you can't create one just like that - only a highly skilled Jounin or above character could do it, and they'd have to roleplay it correctly. You'll also need to register a clan in order to have any bloodline limit techniques. Also, as a rule of thumb, we don't reference to Naruto himself, as we're set about a hundred years AFTER the canon story. You'll also need to lengthen your Personality, Jutsu, History and RP Sample sections - and remove completely the Strenth, Speed and Chak(a?!)ra stats, as we don't use them here. ~ K Oh, and as an afterthought... Might wanna check your spelling and grammar. Writing well goes a LONG way.
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